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Friday, July 31, 2020

Recount Writing flooding.

Walt: to make our writing more interesting for our readers. 
Flooding
On Friday I went to a big flood. It was out of Kaikohe. 
I looked at the flooding and I said, “Wow.” 
It was so deep that it covered over the fence posts and the fences. It covered the farm. 
The water was rushing and gushing. It was really loud. I felt very scared when I saw all the water covering the paddocks and the fences. I had butterflies in my tummy and they were flying around my tummy and it felt funny. 
I was at a big farm and we went around the farm. It was a massive farm. It was pouring with rain and me and my brother were scared but it was fun because there was heaps of water. The flood water was rushing and gushing everywhere. It was fun and scary at the same time. 
I asked my mum if I could stop and see and she said yes. 
I was excited. We saw trees covered with water. And there was water up to the fence posts. We were all amazed at what we saw.